Bamboo bent from snow
Hangs low over walking path
Creeks rise and trickle.
Art Prescription: And the ground is very squishy, especially at the farm where horses have been tromping around. Beautiful day in the sixties.
Watercolor over another painting. Can you guess which one? Recycling…
Please don’t take offense but this is one of those extremely rare times when the picture doesn’t do justice to the words. Lovely haiku!
Thank you for your honest feedback. I agree! Some of my readers have asked me about disappointments, and this is a good example. I definitely didn’t feel the painting. Might have been a good one to let the haiku stand alone.
I love your layering of different painting. Beautiful poetry and image.
I agree with long4h2o! Each time we sit down to create does not always turn out. I think the painting alone speaks to my mind right now, a bit jumbled up with the new year.